Nevermind, there's not that many.
Your form is as good as any.
And your eyes, they're not spectacular.
In words, they'd be vernacular.
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Dude...It was very creative and formed with feeling, this is the type of rhyming I'm trying to get near too! I'm gonna read your other stuff, cause I liked this so much
i lvoe this poem. It just really made me think! ten out of ten and keep it up!
Its so true, we love people on second but then stuff changes. And I like the rhyming throughout