Tuesday, December 21, 2004

How Do I Look? Comments

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She said something exquisite here today:

'It's like you're standing -warts and all- no mercy, naked.
Exposed to hungry eyes of your new handsome lover.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 December 2004

Sandra, I respectfully disagree. H

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Sandra Osborne 22 December 2004

More prose than poetry. But I did feel it.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 December 2004

Actually, I am not too old to know better, but the inspiration to 'how do I look' came from a comment sent to me by a wonderful and very talented poet named Jayne. H

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Warren Augustus De Guzman 21 December 2004

Interesting and simple. This piece makes me wonder if you are just reminiscing or if you are younger than you say you are. -war

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