How do I begin to describe
the fragile substance of a heart
will the words flow in the same rhythm as its beat
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twixt His endless fingers.... my heart merely a toy... twisting to love twisted into love
Dear Kasia Fedyk, your beautiful poem started with some word that make Attraction to follow and read it to the end.
i loved the second stanza, the apposition is awesome kasia...good job, keep writing..
You did not begin to describe, but described each element perfectly. Loved the flow of the poem and your message. You and unwritten soul I read most when I need repose.
you have the emotion flow between lines............this is what an absolute poem.........a constrast presentation too......for i observed different from rest of ur poems! ! ............your words as mine.....love and light