Saturday, July 7, 2012

How Do I Begin To Describe Comments

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How do I begin to describe
the fragile substance of a heart
will the words flow in the same rhythm as its beat
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Kasia Fedyk
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Swetha Vanakayalapati 12 July 2012

you have the emotion flow between lines............this is what an absolute poem.........a constrast presentation too......for i observed different from rest of ur poems! ! ............your words as mine.....love and light

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twixt His endless fingers.... my heart merely a toy... twisting to love twisted into love

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Hamid Negah 09 July 2012

Dear Kasia Fedyk, your beautiful poem started with some word that make Attraction to follow and read it to the end.

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Valerie Dohren 08 July 2012

Beautifully penned, great use of imagery and well written.

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Shouvik Roy 08 July 2012

i loved the second stanza, the apposition is awesome kasia...good job, keep writing..

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Captain Cur 07 July 2012

You did not begin to describe, but described each element perfectly. Loved the flow of the poem and your message. You and unwritten soul I read most when I need repose.

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