One day, I heard a voice clearly in my ears
Saying Sonny, wipe away your tears
Rise above your peers
And do away with your fears
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ohh man this poem, its is out of this world..nice bro keep it up
you have the gift of rhyme and you are using it very well to your advantage, i like how u also compared Picasso and Shakespeare, its no crime to rhyme, anytime you want to belt out a hyme it'll be a prime rhyme to mime, great work with two thumbs up and a 10 take care mate :)
I find this really interesting would like to speak face-to-face with writer