How Dare You Imprison God? Comments

Hello Fiona i can tell you meant every word and how true if only humans could realize God can not be contained He is everything.Great poem Fiona.Well done

I forgot How dare you imprison, God. The idea is fantastic and very original, I don't thinkl this was ever thought of before? In any case, congratulations!

The Pantheistic Beauty of this poem is extraordinary. Yes, God cannot be imprisoned in a building, He is all around us and is in everything, if you are a believer. Gods light should shine inside all of us, in that secret well deep within us but there is so much unexplained evil in man, Yes, yes I know it was Eve's fault and all that but it's always easy to blame others for what you are doing wrong. In any case, beautiful ideas and beautifully written. S.