How dare you
Make me fall
If you wouldn't
Catch me at all
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I like the concept of the poem.. Very sad.. Very bitter.. Keep it up.. c:
Bitterness and anger flow bonded at the same time, woven with the threads of your style. Nice write. Keep writing!
great poem i can relate to this is so painful n hurt so much its so much emotion n angry 10+
nice rational poem, keep writing..........