Sunday, June 28, 2009

How Dare You Comments

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How dare you
Make me fall
If you wouldn't
Catch me at all
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Marieta Maglas 22 July 2009

nice rational poem, keep writing..........

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Nashy Lamen 10 July 2009

I like the concept of the poem.. Very sad.. Very bitter.. Keep it up.. c:

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Danzen D. 28 June 2009

Bitterness and anger flow bonded at the same time, woven with the threads of your style. Nice write. Keep writing!

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Christina Phan 28 June 2009

great poem i can relate to this is so painful n hurt so much its so much emotion n angry 10+

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