Wednesday, April 30, 2008

How Could You? Comments

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how could u keep your tears from falling,
when there's someone who keeps your heat breaking?

how could you give yourself to someone,
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2017

how could you heal a heart of scars and wounds, when the only cure is unreachable as it flies to the moon? very expressive of the pain that you suffer forming into questions? can anyone answer it all satisfactorily.? good poem, sincere in its core.. tony

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Chitra - 28 August 2008

a true to the core poem!

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Shalini Kts 19 August 2008

'how could you? ' is a true love poem poem saying yes i cant be without you... great

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Jun Insigne 25 July 2008

how could you give yourself to someone, when that someone does'nt even care for your love? , , , , , , , , , , Good writing, , , , , Thanks

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Rebecca Hansen 19 June 2008

to answer those questions..the only way you can override your feelings about something is to realize how much better you are without them...even if you may think you love them..the one you love will never cause you pain...yes, you may come upon many people who make you feel good about yourself..but consider them FRIENDS not LOVERS....and this 'love' you are talking about, consider them as no one..any one who makes you feel like that isnt worth you time: ] this was truely a great poem though..and thanks for the comment on mine..and even though i may have someone who im in love with..dont let yourself get down...keep it positive..: ] promise me: ]

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Priyanka Shetty 09 June 2008

i loved all your poems and this one too..... :)

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Janri Gogeshvili 30 April 2008

Figuratively … it is beautiful..._' Every man is the architect of his own fortune'

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