Sunday, April 12, 2009

How Could I? (Regret) Comments

Rating: 4.0

How could I let you leave me?
How could I let you slip between my fingers?
How could I let you not care about me, your friend's, fellings?
How could I not tell you how I feel?
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Patrick OBrien
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

well expressed and heartfelt

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Beau Bennett 12 April 2009

the line 'how can i forgive you when you dont want to apoligize' i dont know it somehow wrang true of many old feelings good job i gave you an 8 on this and i dont give out many 10s so its a compliment, and im more of a song writter so poems that dont ryme arent my fortay so again good job

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