Monday, March 23, 2009

How Come? Comments

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Leaving you looking after another guy
Starting to care about another boy
How can it come? ? ?
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Luwi Habte
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Sid John Gardner. 06 April 2009

Luwi..The more you write the more your English will improve.You are doing very well.Try someting a little less emotional; About nature..an animal...beauty in flowers, your home, landscape etc.Everyone writes to get things out of our system.We all do.Try one about your country...Perhaps no more than ten lines. Will look forward to reading. Sid x.

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