Tuesday, December 29, 2015

How Charming Is She Comments

Rating: 5.0

How cute you are!
And do you know?
One day I was so!
But then I lost
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Valsa George 30 December 2015

Once we were all young and beautiful! But time has played its mischief and we have grown far beyond recognition! We can only recollect the memories of those sweet times! But we feel happy to see our children growing into exuberant beauty and charming youthfulness.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 December 2015

Knowledge wins over ignorance. Cuteness defines the beauty in ornamental appearance. This poem draws a very nice imagery. Interesting sharing done definitely.10

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Nosheen Irfan 30 December 2015

But then I lost to the cruel knowledge, my ignorance, my innocence. Another beautiful poem by a truly poetic soul. 10

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Umar Hashmi 29 December 2015

I liked this beautiful poem of my grandfather........................

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M Asim Nehal 29 December 2015

How beautifully you write! Do you know? ... We all enjoy you work Admire your thoughts And cherish your poems........10

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M Asim Nehal 29 December 2015

How beautifully you write! Do you know? We all enjoy you work Admire your thoughts And cherish your poems........10

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