Monday, May 24, 2010

How Champions Are Made Comments

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Im in the ring
The bell sounds
I throw a punch
We dance around
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Rinki Nandy 07 June 2010

nicely rhymed and straight to the point poetry..good job....hope youwould spare some time on mynew entries.. regards rinki.

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Emma Adamyan 02 June 2010

poetic and realistic at the same time. using simbolic things u could open an important point

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Preetam Shetty 25 May 2010

Great Job bro...simply loved this piece especially when you say In his features I see my face

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