Sunday, December 13, 2015

How Can You Be So Heartless? Comments

Rating: 4.8

I gave you my love,
But you hurt me more than i deserve,
I gave you my heart,
For you to play with it,
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perseverance Rasethitje
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Chinedu Dike 26 December 2015

An insightful depiction of distress in bliss of love, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Walking out of a relationship that is fraught with pain, disappointment, and frustration is a sure step towards regaining one's dignity and sanity. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Perseverance. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 December 2015

Forgiving and giving love both are amazing in this wise sharing. Very neatly drafted and shared.10

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