Monday, February 22, 2010

How Can You? Comments

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How can you live if you can't learn to love?
How can you keep looking down without wondering what's above?
How can you sleep knowing no one will be there when you wake?
How can you pretend that not all of your life is particularly fake?
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Joseph Cuevas
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Rachael Curtis 22 February 2010

A very nice piece, the rhyming is quite clever and it works in well. I like the theme, and I particularly like the way you end it. Its shows determination, persistance and kindness. I love it! =D

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