I still remember the most fragrant flower
That assaulted my senses with wonder
The song that made me cry a river
Is vividly imprinted
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If mother is treasure, father is the treasure chest. It is up to us only how we value them both. Touching poem Rose Marie. Speaks volumes of your devotion and love 10+
Thank you rose for another wonderful poem dedicated to your father...10+++
We all have so many sweet memories associated with our parents! Reading your poem I am reminded of my father and the concern he had for his family and the hard work he put in to give his children a decent living! This poem is a lovely tribute of a grateful daughter who is full of pride that she has inherited his features! A 10
Moreover, you are a lovely daughter of your beloved father! I feel you must read this wonderful poem when you feel absence of your father dear Rose!
I remember you/With love today/I spoke to God the other day/To bless your soul every single day.......great remembrance...earnest prayer! I love and respect this profound piece of work loaded with tons of love and emotions! (10)
Tweak: You lives on through me. Otherwise, nice line.. stanza 4: nice ppp alliteration! You are very lucky if these are your true feelings, well-expressed, which you hold for your father. To MyPoemList. bri :)
when a father looks into his daughters eyes, his love and protection is completely blind - he sees in her all the beauties she has to give and in his heart she will forever live..
Fragrant flower is remembered still today. Life is experienced in between troubles and success and in between hate and love. But we expect love and peace ever. Life is very beautiful. We remember our Father God. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned....10
A very touching piece dedicated to you beloved father......eternal.
Lovely emotions nicely painted in beautiful words, a touching poem.
Thank you, Akhtar for your kind words. They will always be treasured.
You brought me into this world! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you for your comment, Edward. Your visit is much appreciated.
A perfect and fragrant poem of remembrance! Thank you for recalling your father with such vivid beauty!