Monday, December 22, 2008

How Can I Make You See? Comments

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Ive never heard the coo of a dove
but your voice I love.
Metaphors and flattery,
used again and again,
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Jeremy Patnou
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

A bold and truthful poem of love. Certainly a creative way to win the heart of the one you love. I often wonder though, how often does it work? GW62

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Joseph Poewhit 22 December 2008

Real simple truth pen, paper, and the heart.

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Jeremy Patnou

Jeremy Patnou

Huntington Beach California
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