How Can I Count! Comments

Lyricism like a cascade of a waterfall. Well done

Civilization's wisdom is contained in words.Words may be soft or hard, may create hope or fear.We can use words for the best of mankind or misuse them.So it is said - -Watch your words. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem.

Words make fresh When words are flowers Words define paths When they are stars Precious they are In hopelessness Words bring life - - - -An amazing and powerful write.

So much wisdom here, Ali. I am reminded that one of the most devastating things a person can face is no words....silence, neglect, perhaps the greatest abuse. In some cases ugly words are the basis for a better reality. So imagine the power of positive words.? A great poem, Ali. (Report)

Words define paths When they are stars Precious they are In hopelessness- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -oh! very well written. Words are our oil paints with which we can comunicate from one soul to another. I like the way you respect them!

Words are very useful, but we have be careful of how we use them. Even so, encouraging words can breathe life into lowly souls!

Nice perception about the words.. the very Building blocks of our Poems.. and for every move and with every contact in Life..! nicely expressed Poet. Thank you for inviting me! 10+++

Words are precious like our breathe. We cannot count either of them.When we loose we realise its worth. Beautiful write. Loved the ink.

Beautiful, words are the bricks that the world we making surround us, with love it make us stay in peace and with mad lines it change life to be crazily uneasy... And with words also we can convey what heart wanted to tell not only just keep the feeling inside... How beautiful world is because of great words, and they born from mind that think and heart that has the beauty... Lovely work Ali

Brilliant write, nicely conceptualized. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

Such a powerful piece of writing in your own characteristic style that is so appealing. I like how you have said so much in this single piece.

Such meaningful write.... Yes, words have so much power!

words are very powerful tools. they can heal and they also can destroy careful thoughtful words are a must. love this poem

Power of the words is enormous. That is what we see here. Life breath. Life ceases when it stops. We don't count how many times we breathe. Nice poem.

words have brought life here too...yes, how can i count...a simple question with all its profundity! ! !

With simple words, you have managed to convey a depth of thought provoking images. I very much appreciate the invitation to read your work. I believe we should all strive to speak KINDER words to one another, in the spirit of better understanding not only our differences, but more importantly, our similarities! Well done....PEACE

Wonderful descriptive writing Ali. I liked 'words define paths when they are stars' 'words are sunset at some sea shore. The last stanza is excellent and I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Top marks Karin Anderson

A moment of breath is how much life! A well coined line. good read. shan

'O Great God! ! A moment of breath is how much life! How many times... death is coming with a breath inside! How can I count! ! ' Amazing lines 10++

u hav managed the poem vry well......... words r the one dat describe the inner thoughts of a person. i really liked the twist at the end. regards.