How Can I Bleed My Feelings Out? Comments

How should I write, Mountain of feeling in words like 'tiny flies'- - - - - - - - - - - - - -> you have so many poems with outstanding lines like this! ! !

love in a word, excites; poem seems to sound like it... stand in the rain facing up until it stops... that abundance of wetness like the drippings from a cross turns us all into poets and into poems; like John, the one who describes himself as the one most loved. might leave less time for the bleeding of love from the 'SELF'. Good Stuff!

wow great poem great use of hyperbole and humour too :)

rather hyperbolic version you can say -intense volcanic eruption of feelings-though interrogative in form but not interrogative in sense-the dots in the last line are the hint of the continuation...doc sb stay cool plz-

wow... really grt poem.. full of emotionzz... nice title.

I prefer the english version coz the feelings in words have been brought up in much better way...keep it up!

Just awesome... The hindi version is also very nice.. Specially the way you've used the delicate terms it's just awesome..