How Can I Be Such A Fool? Comments

a very good poem trust and betrayal portrayed very well strong emotions come into play in it and give more breath to the entire contents but love and loving someone isn't a mistakes or foolishness, that's a gift i invite you to read my the story of you and elegy of small waves That are poems with another perpective of love

hmm...another beautiful work Zoya, I'm beginning to get jealous, ...anyways nice work however check line 6- To be - I fell on them nd 2nd to last -...and let a foolish....nd I jst tink u should remove sluggish.... ~TT~™

Great narration of the story, lovely flow and good wording, that makes a beautiful poem mntakwethu, imnandi inkodlo yakho kakhulu but ngoba yinkondlo exoxayo beyingaba yintle kakhulu uma inama stanza, kanje... You came to me with a smile, Without knowing its fake I smiled back at you. You opened your hands for me Without knowing it’s a trap I fall on them. You looked me in the eye Without thinking that it was all a lie, You were just reading my mind I looked back at you. But still sihle esi sihobe kwaye ndiyazidla ngawe Zandile and you get stronger with every write, betha ungayeki ke ntokazi. Siya_! !

pleasure reading and a gud poem to talk on got the air

hay sure guys... thank you for the comments :) :) [hppy vibes]

it didn't happen to you did it? if it has, tell me the bastards name. i will curse him with all dirty words i know. i know from experience how good those empty promises sound. it was a real write. you rock :)

Uuuuuuuuuuuh, you sound tough, that's the way love is sometimes. Great write