Wednesday, June 25, 2008

How Can Anyone Love A Pebble In Their Shoe? Comments

Rating: 4.5

I saw your look of disgust
I ate up your lies
For that I do not trust
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Greenwolfe 1962 28 June 2008

The last line is stunningly brilliant. This line alone makes this a 9 in my view. Poetry, is all about summing something up in as few words as possible. You did it here young lady. Congratulations! I'm jealous of that line. HaHa! GW62

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Payyton Egerstaffer

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Fort Polk, Louisiana
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