Wednesday, October 26, 2011

How Beautiful The World Is! Comments

Rating: 5.0

crisp autumn air
wisp of silky hair
hollowly roaring sea
beautifully buzzing bee
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anncelin dev
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Anncelin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Robert Green 29 June 2012

What imagery :) so wonderfully written keep up the good work.

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Anncelin Dev 26 October 2011

thnk u all for ur sincere comments :)

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Vipins Puthooran 26 October 2011

How beautiful this poem is! ! ! I like the imageries, , well written.. A good poem! ! ! ! Top marks, , ,

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Kee Thampi 26 October 2011

sonorous and more red velvet sunset burnishing bloomy rosette pleasing hue of flower

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