Sunday, July 5, 2009

How Are You? Comments

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I asked friend 'how are you'?
He said not good but in hands of Thou,
I was amused and asked why?
He was going to fly,
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chirag manubhai
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Dwi Utami 12 July 2010

Hey friend i.m read your poem''how are you'' and i.m answer I.M FINE.he.he.is good of you, in your age 12year old, you trying for creat poem.god luck.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 19 July 2009

Good start! Writing poetry is great!

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asked friend 'how are you'? He said not good but in hands of Thou, ... good write andbeautiful theme... keep it up.. longway to go for u.... i like it..10

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