When the sun was about to set
And the moon showed its glimpses
The dull looking faces
Started to glow in my eyes
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Wowwww....splendid write. The desires of the flesh are so beautifully expressed in rich breath-taking imagery. The Nature elements have a deep impact on our feelings. The moon is the symbol of beauty and romance igniting intense emotions in humans. You have put it so beautifully. An awesome write. A perfect 10.
Great write Asim..... Unless the beasts are pushed back, they are sure to attack us! ! A sure 10