Thursday, February 28, 2008

How Am I Supposed To Hold It? Comments

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I'd leave what is left
from the few pages I turned
If I was so deft
to learn to unlearn
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Wes Thompson
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Callie Carroll 28 February 2008

Some intriguing phrases (fragile permanence, wrists bound by remembrance, and others) but I could garner more meaning for myself if you would help me with a little punctuation The rhythm sings for me! Oh, is contrue a typo or your own creation?

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