Thursday, April 30, 2009

How Alone Am I Comments

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The question is how alone am I?
In this world full of smiles
This melody of happy rhymes
The gateway of long gay miles
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Beena Jal
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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2010

The question is how alone am I? Some times I wonder deep in my soul What if my luck goes for a stroll What if no longer am I so sure Instead of flying I start to crawl Many I know will glide away Could they be blamed for not to stay When chattering voices having nothing to say When stars no longer guide my way what a meaningful and professionally written poem is this one. specially this stanza of poem is awesome and heart touching one..your talent should not let you feel lonely.. inspiring poetry is yours..

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Gautam Sen 22 February 2010

Good self assessing one in a self questioning mode. Yes, no one on this earth is left alone, we're under Almighty's mighty care. keep it up. More I will read of yours. Gautam

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 November 2009

The question is not a new one; loneliness is the destiny of humankind since eternity. But you have given the answer in the last stanza of your poem. Your self-determination and self-discovery is admirable. Keep it up. Best Wishes Naseer

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Afzal Shauq 30 July 2009

The question is how alone am I? Never alone shall I ever be My God keeps an eye on me And till I have my family Never alone shall I ever be what a sweet and prefessionally written within poetic frame... flow is melodic and the idea is quite impresive and like when you are ending your question of lonliness with having your God and family with you.. really a good poem..well done

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Akram Saqib 19 June 2009

a thought provoking idea in philosophic tone

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Yes, no one is alone, Allah is with us,10++

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Charles Wanjohi 30 April 2009

You are never alone even when on a lonesome path there is always somebody watching over you. This poem, very good

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Ravinder Malhotra 30 April 2009

A nice choice of words to echo a question? How alone am I.......Keep up the effort. It's good

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