Wednesday, September 6, 2017

How A Day Is Born Comments

Rating: 5.0

When darkness struggles to remain dark
And the sun struggles for a little more sleep but is awake
On hearing melody of sweet souls and dews wish to live daylong
Then born a day sublime and young
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Susan Williams 31 December 2017

Yes! ! ! ! Yes! ! ! ! In every way, YES! ! ! ! I am visually and spiritually and emotionally engaged by every line in this perfect piece. I am putting this on My Fav Poem List and I wish I could give you a million trillion 10's for this fluid and lovely poem! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Many many thanks.......Susan........I am humbled

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Rajnish Manga 06 September 2017

What an artistic and scintillating landscape of the day- from dawn to next dawn with glimpses of noon, evening, night sprinkled in between. The personification is matchless. It's delightful. Thanks. When darkness struggles to remain dark And the sun struggles for a little more sleep.... When brightness struggles to stay bright And the sun struggles to tarry in the east

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