Wednesday, June 5, 2013

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What has my life become, is what they said true
Was the you I thought I knew, not you?
Did you lie to me, so innocent and niave
Take me away, make it to hard to breath?
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Julie McLeod
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C.ann Penning 17 June 2013

Great flow and full of emotion... well done poet :)

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