Wednesday, April 6, 2016

House Of Pain Comments

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Be my soul a house of pain
Broken heart, pieces of brain
Failures of thoughts, the body is paying
All of much, wasting my sane
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Tinashe Mupedzapasi
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2016

Feeling no wind when flying by Pain and much pain on loosing heart i like your determination at the end of the poem.. i will fight till death. such a positive determination you are conveying to the readers now. thank you again. tony

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