Wednesday, November 7, 2012

House Of Joy! Comments

Rating: 4.8

The house full of just played toys, ,
Just fed bowls, just torn papers,
Newly added drawing to walls,
What a pleasure to eyes and souls,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 April 2020

It is really a magnificent poem on family with it's health care and education to children. You have said rightly that mothers' ignorance in scientific knowledge is the real reason for many health problems in the modern world. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with us. Full vote.

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Chinedu Dike 26 December 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

Beautiful poem with good message to allow the children to play freely as well as teach them to keep things properly. Loved reading it.

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 August 2016

The children ought to be growing inquisitive! The educationists should catch this point.

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Dr John Celes 31 May 2016

yes, allow children to be and grow up like children. fine theme madam.

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Bharati Nayak 04 August 2015

OH loved the poem. We should give our little children the freedom to play, read and learn in a natural way. through dolls and toys with pleasure.Restricting them with discipline may curb their creativity..A fantastic poem.

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Prasanna Kumari 20 November 2012

good poem with good thought...brought some nostalgic memories too...

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Vijay Sai R 12 November 2012

its a joy to read....

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Dave Walker 10 November 2012

A fantastic poem, I have a four year old, her toys and drawings are everywhere.

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Savita Tyagi 10 November 2012

Loved it. To have a house full with children's love and laughter is a blessing. Hope young mothers are reading your poem.

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Valsa George 10 November 2012

House is the only place, where we can take little liberties! Children shouldn't be tortured in our eagerness to keep the house spic and span! But they should be gently taught the lessons of orderliness! Good write! !

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Lyn Paul 09 November 2012

Well written, Let us have this House of Joy forever. Thank you

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Valerie Dohren 08 November 2012

Good advice Veeraiyah, well penned.

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