Saturday, October 24, 2015

House Number 974 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time,
A newly wedded bride,
Showered with heaps of love and blessings.
With stars in her eyes,
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Rajnish Manga 24 August 2018

We all are like the inmates of House No 974 and live as per the pleasure of the God Almighty. The narrative rides on suspense like in a tale of mystery and then unfolds a philosophy of life. Thanks, Jasbir ji. A newly wedded bride.... ushered into house number 974; She thought life was going to be One long, happy fairy tale.... But, alas, that was not to be…

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2015

While the ghosts of my past engulfed me. Nice work; with the muse of sadness.

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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2015

'Nothing is mine'- - - - - When we realize this fact, we get the wisdom to accept the ups and downs of life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2015

Very wisely presented and story hidden behind this expressive poem improves qualities of thoughts. Surrounded with lush greenery, beautiful f lowers, chirping birds, and busy bees, this poem perfectly speaks about imagery. Very amazing sharing definitely...10

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Mj Lemon 27 October 2015

A very moving work. Reading this is an experience. The poem has a certain Gothic romance quality. A great poem.

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