Monday, August 26, 2019

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Rating: 3.8

in a cup of life
only spring was
no contrition of winter or summer
stung its grass
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Anjandev Roy 08 September 2019

in my heart Of flapping flirt! ..........lovely piece. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 September 2019

A great thoughtful poem, a disaster looks very close, the ship of the earth has to reduce the increasing burden of growing population, who will be thrown into the ocean and who will continue the sailing, perhaps nature has left it for the probability.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 August 2019

under the sexiest fate-sun the broker of hope shears earth's earn burned! burned! hottest undone! in my experience the HOTTEST DAY LIES INSIDE A BEDSHEET AS IN THE DARKNESS OF NIGHT

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2019

Now melting! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2019

NICE SEXY METAPHORICALLY @33 PLUS

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