Monday, April 14, 2014

Hotel Paradise Comments

Rating: 2.8

Her daddy burned the house to the ground when we was just kids,
Collected the money and decided to stay a while.
I had stars in my eyes when I heard the news:
My best friend is living at the Holiday Inn.
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Susan Lacovara 05 May 2014

Funny how we look at the slices of life, others are served...thinking them delicious, only to discover they are starving for something sweeter. You penned a poignant poem, very honest. Your talent is true. PEACE

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Leah Ayliffe

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