The hot tubs at the fitness center.
Are divine for people who enter.
When you are as old as me you ache.
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Thank you for adding the poet's note explaining what Korsakoff syndrome is.
Ah, by watching the picture itself I feel relaxed, Such a wonderful poem, Thanks for sharing...10
Thanks for your high vote. May the peace always stay with you.
Very relaxing poem. However, in the poet's notes you should have explained to ignoramuses like me what Korsakoff syndrome is.
An experience that shared with readers in a good poem and likes.
I actually love this. This is why i love poetry. You can make anything a poem. This is a 10 for me
Thanks very much. A poem like this is best written right after the event.
Aahh! I enjoyed this poem. Reminds me that once I sat in a hot tub outdoors in Juneau, Alaska, in February with lots of snow piled up around it as fine snowflakes sifted down into the water. A good memory. The only bad part was getting out of the hot tub and trying to hurry back to the house.
In my case the tub was close to the door. I only got cold when getting in it.