Saturday, November 21, 2015

Hot Tub Rejuvenation Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hot tubs at the fitness center.
Are divine for people who enter.

When you are as old as me you ache.
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Grace Jessen 12 September 2016

Aahh! I enjoyed this poem. Reminds me that once I sat in a hot tub outdoors in Juneau, Alaska, in February with lots of snow piled up around it as fine snowflakes sifted down into the water. A good memory. The only bad part was getting out of the hot tub and trying to hurry back to the house.

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

In my case the tub was close to the door. I only got cold when getting in it.

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Kim Barney 24 November 2015

Thank you for adding the poet's note explaining what Korsakoff syndrome is.

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

No problem. I don't actually have it.

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M Asim Nehal 23 November 2015

Ah, by watching the picture itself I feel relaxed, Such a wonderful poem, Thanks for sharing...10

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thanks for your high vote. May the peace always stay with you.

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Kim Barney 22 November 2015

Very relaxing poem. However, in the poet's notes you should have explained to ignoramuses like me what Korsakoff syndrome is.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 21 November 2015

An experience that shared with readers in a good poem and likes.

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Austin Warwick 21 November 2015

I actually love this. This is why i love poetry. You can make anything a poem. This is a 10 for me

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thanks very much. A poem like this is best written right after the event.

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