Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Hot Summer Night Comments

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It was stifling in bed yet you
lay with a sheet undulating
with your breath, like a sail
in a gentle breeze.
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jerry hughes
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honetuwharepoetrygmail.com 24 November 2020

Kia ora Jerry Great to see Dads poem being used. I do have some concerns regarding the use of his work. Can you contact me please so we can discuss these. Nga mihi Rob Tuwhare Executor The Estate of Hone Tuwhare

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Adeline Foster 19 July 2015

Loved it, do appreciate rain. Read mine - Rain - Adeline

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

I saw your hand move to where your garden blooms, and your smile said you weren't. Rachel Ann Butler

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Lillian J. 06 July 2007

I like this, very impressive. Lilly :)

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Alison Cassidy 23 May 2007

You say much in few words, erotically and with a smile. Beautiful poetry. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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