Thursday, May 25, 2017

Hot Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are tired of climbing the hills,
We are tired of carrying the guns,
We are tired of crying of the birds
We all are tired of hot sun of may.
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Sahara Parvin
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Tom Allport 26 May 2017

a poem with a belief in what they do is right for them and their country? .............well written.

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Bimal Hati 26 May 2017

Thank you so much... a poet like you! ! It gives me immense pleasure really.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 May 2017

A poetic burning with burning of life. Thanks

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Bimal Hati 26 May 2017

Jazib, your evaluation has increases the effect of the poem..... Thank you so much.

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Gajanan Mishra 25 May 2017

we are none, it is right.

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Bimal Hati 25 May 2017

Thanks.... It is you who first comment in my poem.... I am glad.

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Sahara Parvin

Sahara Parvin

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