Saturday, March 2, 2019

Hot Shower Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the hot water falls down onto me
I want to wash the layers away
Years of hurt and pain
Cling like dirt on my skin
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Jennifer Birchall
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Matthew Holloway 06 March 2019

another well written poem

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Amir Marandi 02 March 2019

Like peeling of an onion, it is never late to peel off the layers of pains, ugliness and unhappiness of the past. Who knows, the next layer might be the happiness you are searching for.

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Julia Luber 02 March 2019

At least some of the hurt and pain washed down the drain. At lease some of the fresh clean water was used before it was wasted down the drain.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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