Monday, March 26, 2012

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Rating: 4.5

I sit here silently thinking
Of being there, yet
Whenever I get there,
I sit there and think of
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Joan Mateo 26 March 2012

Nice way of putting the top part together. it really gets you thinking of how the poem will end. -nice job!

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