Hot Sand Dunes Comments

How succinctly you glorify Nature there! Beauty is in the beholders' eyes. So is In the poets' expressive wonderment. Brilliant piece Rose Marie 10+

Visiting this poem again, here is an example of a poem's structure can do, what implying can do instead of using direct words like sermons. Subtlety thy name is poetry. All these aspects are reflected in this piece in plenty. A piece par excellence.

The value of precious water has been expressed fantastically in this three line poem.

On the vast sand dunes Only hot motionless air Water is like gold.

Exactly, in deserts and in most countries in Africa (I have experienced that myself) there is no good water or no water at all. That's why the NL has made in the African countries many water wells so that the inhabitants can get fresh clean water every day. Water is the most important thing in our daily activities.(life) . A 10+++++++++++ and this jewel goes to MyPoemList. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family.

Let us live and die for this gold. am amazing poem

Love and Life! ! Living, Water is like gold! ! ! Facing the muse of the heat. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Outstanding........ Thanks. Anjandev Roy.

It is indeed! Well done Rose Marie!

The very image of the scene comes to the mind. Three short lines, but how vast the pen pans! Beautiful.

A lovely marvelous haiku, dear Ate Rose....10++++

motionless air hot sand cause of global warming and the water is there precious life giver........../// great write

A fabulous brief work with fascinating imagery! A very creditable piece of work.......10

We get the picture, Very well, Plus feeling, the heat, As well. Got to run and put some water on my face, no kidding. Loved it. Amazing, what sheer and total writing talent can do.

Great visualization in this poem. That's what good poetry should be.