Friday, December 11, 2015

Hot Roll Comments

Rating: 5.0

Go on pressing me as much as you can,
you are decreasing my per unit volume,
now I am dense enough,
I have a definite weight,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 31 October 2016

you face, your body and your silky legs.............ha ha i think you want your face ;) you will be turned in a Hot Roll, mmmmaybe into a Hot Roll. did the speaker start as a gas? then went to liquid? then solid? a most interesting turn of events! and i don't see the topic as weakness. seems 'silky legs' is pretty STRONG to be able to do all that! a tasty treat, whether a human partner or a 'sandwich'. yum, yum. i think sweetheart AND you are two lucky people. bri ;)

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2015

Pressing the spirit out of people happens when we are at our most vulnerable, great wisdom in this wonderful write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2015

Pressing the hot roles again and again is very fantastic with expression of this wise poem. Sharing love to sweet heart through roll poem is wise and interesting. Amazing.10

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