Wednesday, April 26, 2017

Hot Pearls Of My Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

You still sleep in the same bed room,
the portrait of a newly married couple is still hanging on the wall,
pleasant winds coming from the Arabian Sea still titillating,
through the western window like a thief they come.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 April 2017

Relations are like a delicious dishes frozen in a deep freezer and are required to be heated in the heart. An unique comparison! An exhaustive poem that highlights a lonely heart pinning for love. The beautiful nature playing a phenomenal role with metaphors and similes makes the poem a marvellous piece of exquisite poetry. Thank you, Akhtar Sahab, for this classic poem.100

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Khalida Bano Ali 26 April 2017

An emotional poem..............................................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2017

It is a beautiful poem on loneliness and night having thrilling expression and nice collocation. Many thanks dear Akhtar ji.

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