Thursday, January 21, 2016

Hot Night Comments

Rating: 4.2

Walking through the boiling steam of this endless night
feeling her black cloak without relief, no sign of breeze,
soaking light from moon above, reflecting of soul.
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Hazel Durham 12 December 2018

I love this deep and outstanding write that has so many meanings to whoever has the pleasure of reading this subtle write and the beauty of your words that embrace and ask questions about life!

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Akhtar Jawad 27 September 2018

It does not seem a poem just describing a hot night. It looks like a metaphor, describing the human thirst for for a drink of love. Luz Hanaii has written this poem with her heart and soul and has created a poem of beautiful words and amazing lines.

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