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Fortunate is that man who has been given a second chance. I like your positive conclusion. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra

Hi Sathya. a wonderful peice of work and I also like the conclusion at the end. well done Regards Dave T.

lovely poems, I have peace in the world like you

I liked the subject matter and the poetical treatment given! The last two lines gives it a positive conclusion! -Raj Nandy

in the end a good advice to him...a sincere attempt in writing poetry

yes bhayya you're true about this poem, it sure is a powerful full with wise words another great write from one of the great poet...10+++++

You are an expert in writing exquisite poetry about human psychology.A 10!

One-man show of warding off woes by one's own self...'stand up and just walk out' speaks everything...poetic beauty simply exquisite..fantastic

The suffering you can bring upon yourself by your misdeeds that only you can change. Very clever way of saying it....10

...compact and lovely composition indeed! It has emitted the truth..........10+++++

easier said than done, no? enjoyed the metaphor!