Hot, Humid Day In India Comments

Hey, I didn't realise you'd written so many poems, young lady. I'm afraid I was rudely interrupted by my computer adding some updates and demanding a restart! Your poem reminds me of the last few days here in England. It's been unseasonably hot and the sea breezes have been most welcome. I like the way you link back into memories of schooldays. It's a beautiful poem and you have a very good sense of rhythm. A ten without doubt. Tom