Thursday, February 21, 2013

Hot Hare.... The Gamblers Life In B Minor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Regret and relief stroll hand in hand
The end should never be this bitter
The taste of you this vile
As Wenslas i followed your staggered steps
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 March 2013

Aha a bit too advanced for me since english aint my mothertongue, but whatever i graspd about d gamble n game of life n takin chances placed before me a great sublime poem. Hats off to u.

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Owain Glyn 10 March 2013

Addiction, of any type is sad, but you're right, it's not yours!

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Danny Draper 21 February 2013

Hare hare! ! The winner takes it all, the looser standing small - ABBA. A powerfully portrayed piece of chances taken and the risks that we expose ourselves and our life's resources to for happiness, the greener grass the intoxicating desire to be the one. Beautiful analogy of reasons for our risks and the losses we can and do incur. A great construction of grand imagery as grand as our grandest notions of love and the solitary hare vulnerable taking the risk to exit the tower and solitude, a lovely metaphor. Thank you.

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