Sunday, April 4, 2010

Hot Chocolate Comments

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The swirling, twirling steam
swirled up and up and up.
My nose followed the scent
and stretched down, down, down.
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Andrew D Robertson
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Richard D. Remler 27 April 2010

I like this one. I'd sneak in the word decadent somewhere eventually, but that's just me. Seems hot chocolate needs a few marshmallows and can be a bit decadent if it's made just right. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Andrew D Robertson

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