Hostage Comments

I don't know much about all this tying up stuff... but I do know that this is very good. You keeping moving forward Linley. There are changing moods - sad, fatalistic, naughty, hopeful - and loads of highly visual images in this. Strong writing. Lovely. jim

Mmmmm....Like the idea. Rude awakening to the 100 thread count is brilliant.Never looked at it that way: -) Love...TO

Love this poem, it hints at the naughtiness, though I love the sweetness too! I've often had a mind to hole my lover into a room never to get out..... Tee Hee! Great read. HG: -) xx