As I lie around in this bed
Absolutely bored out of mind
I have sad thoughts in my head
I wish that these sad thoughts were left behind
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A great poem, I know how you feel, a great write. Take a look at my poem called, Mental Hospital. A true story.
Very profound and well-written poem about the hospital blues most patients have to endure. You wrote it so effectively and honestly in brief but strong lines.