Hospital Comments

Utterly prosaic only redeming factor last stanza. As to whom I may offend I could care less. As for street language I take it you have not read Chaucer. Take your limited mind and shove it sweetie

Very emotive write - well penned.

This has a gentle melancholy and a graceful mercy that ultimate release of death can possibly only achieve.

I Like this poem because it makes us remembering a suffering place...and especially the title ' Hospital ' it makes me remember that i live in a big psychiatric hospital called; Algeria! ! ! ....thank you

The way you present this poem is very realistic. It gives me an image of what a hospital is like, and I must say it is very impressive. You are a good writer, and you present your poem very well. I enjoyed reading this, and good job.

even though this sounds realistic, the way you write gives me a scandinavian art image which I really like. my heart becomes quiet when I read this.

I like these lines, 'Let them go softly into the night. Let them pass through the thick window glass' and the whole of this Poem.

Leslie, I am getting addicted to your work. I love your writing style. Great piece of art! !

nice poem well written...Good very good