Saturday, October 14, 2006

Horseshoe Comments

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Maya, the lovelorn lass in the stable who spends the whole life
with a hobble horse as a hobby until she became a hoary woman.
One day the stallion said goodbye to her.
But still she hears its sorrowful neigh.
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Alison Cassidy 23 May 2009

Something tells me your blacksmith may have comforted poor Maya when the stallion said goodbye. His daughter's name is hardly coincidental, it seems to me. An intriguing tale about love and luck (or the lack of it) . Clever poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 14 October 2006

What an interesting story. Many unanswered questions in this one. Take care, Nimal. Kindest regards, Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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