Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Horses In The Rain Comments

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Rain rioted down cannons
and barrels of flesh.
It dripped into stockings,
rinsed stars white and fresh;
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Cathe Ferguson
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Alto Thomas Jr 24 February 2008

This wonderful poem gets better every time I read it.

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Cathe Ferguson 08 April 2017

Thank you! What a nice thing to say!

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Mary Gordley 19 February 2008

Cathe, a lot of clever work is incorporated here, I wonder if even horse people will get all the double meanings? It took the second read before I got some of them (where frogs never croaked) very clever write.

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Cathe Ferguson 08 April 2017

Thank you for taking the time to catch the meanings! !

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