Monday, January 25, 2016

Horses Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breath, blown hot into the chill air
From a heaving ribcage under straining girth
Steam rising in curtains over sweat-stained backs
The heat of the skin despite cold earth;
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Paul Reed
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 January 2016

The ruined dreams, the missed chances The abrupt crash and the fall....what an amazing composition shared on really. Very wise drafting.10

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